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    ok here is 1 of my old songs i made like last year at the start of our band!


    Hey, take me, take me to the place where dreams come true
    And touch me and kiss me inthe way I used to kiss you
    I can see a ray of light reflecting in your eyes,
    Carrying only happiness without dirty lies

    But after all we are just ordinary friends
    trying to be closer I guess
    But all the while I wanted to see you more, and more
    But I don't want to wait, any more.

    Chorus:

    Hey, take me, hold me to the place where dreams come true
    And touch me and kiss me to the way I used to do to you
    I can see a shaft of light reflecting in your eyes,
    Carrying only happiness without dirty lies

    Don't be surprised if I give you all
    Now my heart beats out of control
    And if you see me just say hello
    Then I'll try to give you my soul

    Chorus:

    Hey, take me, hold me to the place where dreams come true
    And touch me and kiss me to the way I used to do to you
    I can see a shaft of light reflecting in your eyes,
    Carrying only happiness without dirty lies
    *****************************************************************
    critisism is gladly apreciated!!1!!1111!!!!1!11!111111
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    heres 1 more
    this 1 is a little emo-ish type deal but there is 1 thing wrong i need to know something about this world and i need a verse to say that and i cant seem to come up with 1 so crits welcome have a field day !!!

    ~surreality~

    i am living in my surreality.
    -Not too far from insanity
    A place far away from normality
    -This is where I call my home.

    Misunderstood from those around.
    Understanding not to be found.
    For I live so differently.
    I make up my own reality.

    My surreality - Far far away- my surreality

    Tuned the real world out so long ago.
    Memories of pain is all I know.
    Now, I'm making my own wave.
    The world outside I must deprave.

    I am living in my surreality.
    Not too far from your insanity.
    A place far away from normality.
    This is where I call my home.

    My surreality - Far away from normality.

    Please don't wake me from my slumber.
    This dream, I want it to last.
    I want it to last.
    This dream of mine

    I am living in my surreality.
    Not too far from your insanity.
    A place far away from normality.
    This is where I call my home.

    Happenings of the past I fear.
    My recollection trully clear.
    For this reason I must evade.
    Eventuallity I will shade.

    Living in my surreality
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    um this 1 is real quik off the top of my head i need to write down some feelings i just broke up w/ my gf in a big scene and im so sorry so here this goes I'm with you tonight Here I can hold you tight First tree to drop a leaf and I know I can hold this greif Inside Truth doesn't say goodnight You are my star So light No one is saying it 'Cause we are all faking it Love bites And I can't think of something to say Caught up in your eyes Yeah looking to the sky Thinking of all our goodbyes So me Floating on a sea Tangled in a tree Not where I want to be... tonight ******************************************* needs chorus but i tink i could b ok!
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    hey we need to stop copying peoples work i find alot of my stuff on other peopls sites now for real stop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    i just cant fight it heers another

    um i wanted to do somthing angry so i found the anger inside now here it is ...if you dare

    ~sick of this~


    How do you sleep at night
    Why must I try and make right
    Everything I say, Everything I do
    Everything I think, must consist of you

    How do you think just fine
    Why must you waste my time
    Everything you do, Everything you are
    Everything I am, seems so far away

    Give up give in
    I’m right I’ll win
    Fall out fall down
    I won’t leave town
    Sleep in sleep walk
    Shut up don’t talk
    Give up give in
    I’m sick of this

    How do you make it through the day
    And why do you fight this way
    Everything I stand, everything I think
    Everything we are, everything I sing

    Give up give in
    I’m right I’ll win
    Fall out fall down
    I won’t leave town
    Sleep in sleep walk
    Shut up don’t talk
    Give up give in
    I’m sick of this

    I see no reason for this now
    And I see no season in you now
    And I think it’s time to say
    Good bye

    Give up give in
    I’m right I’ll win
    Fall out fall down
    I won’t leave town
    Sleep in sleep walk
    Shut up don’t talk
    Give up give in
    I’m sick of this
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    Hey great lyrics there. When did you start writting? I'm new too this site and I havent leared yet how to post some of my own songs and lyrics. Can you help.
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    hey srry my nets been down so i think ive been writing for about a year now and ya if u need help pm me and thanks u really like my lyrics?
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    wow, you are REALLY good. i especially like the surreality one. materialism really gets on my nerves, my song about it is Cycle of Seasons. i play it on my acoustic with only 2 chords, going back and forth, so it gets really repetitive and starts spinning off and exploding at the 'None can end this cycle of seasons..' part. i'll go ahead and post it just please nobody copy it:

    Snow, snow, falling, falling
    All around my hands and face
    Cold, wet,frozen, sharp
    At the freezing point I cry for release

    Rain, rain, falling, falling,
    All around my hands and face
    Slippery, slimy, dirty, pelting
    Soaked to the bone I cry for release

    Sun, sun, shining, shining,
    All around my hands and face
    Hot, humid, bright, blinding
    Sweating to my death I cry for release

    Leaves, leaves, falling, falling
    All around my hands and face
    Crinkling, crunching, dead and brown
    Shutting out sound I cry for release

    And again the snow
    And again the rain
    And again the sun
    And again the leaves
    And again the snow
    And again the rain
    And again the sun
    And again the leaves
    And again the snow
    And again the rain
    And again the sun
    And again the leaves

    None can end this cycle of seasons
    All is meaningless but faith
    So why worry over all of the seasons,
    when many worry over only life?

    Let us bring them the Word
    In their own toungue
    And let them see for themselves
    That all is meaningless but faith

    And again the snow
    And again the rain
    And again the sun
    And again the leaves
    And again the snow
    And again the rain
    And again the sun
    And again the leaves
    And again the snow
    And again the rain
    And again the sun
    And again the leaves

    None can end this cycle of seasons
    All is meaningless but faith
    So why worry over all of the seasons,
    when many worry over only life?
    Only life
    Only life
    Only life


    but i like yours better. theyr'e really cool.

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