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    Here it is! Haven't put it to music yet though, and I'll probably change it a bit when I do, but just little tweaks to make it sound right.
    {NO LIES}
    False starts, jump starts,
    Re-starts and no starts
    Some people just prefer to say "why start?"
    Long lines, short lines,
    Red lines and blue lines
    Some people just prefer to say "what line?"
    Last time I checked
    I didn't see a line
    Right and wrong were blended together
    So-called artistic masterpiece?!
    Come on!
    Right is right
    Wrong is wrong
    The end don't justify your means
    Words unspoken - promises broken
    Wake up and end the compromise
    Look not witheyes
    Polluted with lies
    Just asking you too
    End the compromise
    New trends, old thrends
    Bad trends and good trends
    Some people just prefer to say "my trend"
    New ways, old ways
    Bad ways and good ways
    Some people just prefer to say "my way"
    Last time I looked
    I didn't see a way
    Steal and pay were blended
    So-called artistic masterpiece?!
    Come on!
    Right is right
    Wrong is wrong
    The end don't justify your means
    Words unspoken - promises broken
    Wake up and end the compromise
    Look not witheyes
    Polluted with lies
    Just asking you too
    End the compromise
    The world screams for us to
    Buy! Sell! Sex! Lie!
    But God screams for us to
    Just live by truth!
    "Get real" is not real
    "Get real" is open ears
    So be real with me and sing along now
    SPOKEN
    If you're followin' God now
    Of if ya wanna get it started
    And give your life to Him
    ANd end the compromise
    Join in with me now
    Whoa! (Whoa!)
    Truth! (Truth!)
    Life! (Life!)
    No lies!
    Right is right
    Wrong is wrong
    The end don't justify your means
    Words unspoken - promises broken
    Wake up and end the compromise
    Look not witheyes
    Polluted with lies
    Just asking you too
    End the compromise
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    UPDATE: duuuuude.... just started plinking around with that song, it's sounding AWESOME. first song ever set to music on my electric!!!! now i just need a band :P this song seriously needs a heavy bass.
    • CommentAuthorawayla
    • CommentTimeMay 11th 2007
     
    that is really good.
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    thx :)
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    not bad...try to add more substance to the lines though. make them really full...
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    quite good...it would be good to hear it...
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    I really like it. Any chance of hearing a demo of it? lay some tracks down in garage band, or something?

    Jared Ribble
    www.advantagemusicproduction.com
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    That's hott, man. Keep it up!
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    no, i don't have a band yet. there was a dude that wanted me to help him start a band, but he's not a christian and he's a nirvana fan, so i'm like NO. i've been majorly slacking on all of my music lately though. feeling burned out, so im taking a break. glad you guys liked it though. i'm beginning to think all of my songs are pretty lame. the lyrics aren't, but the tunes they end up set to are sooooo lame.
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    Awesome song. nice job. umm... I just finished writing a song to sing at the talent show at MBC...do u wanna know the lyrics, got some advice?????
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    Sure, I'll read it :)

    ((BTW I never finished the song I posted on this discussion. It ended up flopping like most of my pathetic work))
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    ok...here it is..

    Sitting in my classroom
    Talking about the theory evoloution
    I wonder how anything so beautiful
    Could be an accident

    You God created me
    With all the love there could be
    There's a reason for me too
    I'm here to help other's understand You

    Sitting in my bedroom
    Reading the textbooks I was told
    How am I just an animal
    I'm unique just like other's

    You God created me
    With all the love there could be
    There's a reason for me too
    I'm here to help other's understand you

    You gave me life
    I'm created in Your image
    You love me with all Your heart
    That's why I live my live for You

    You God created me
    With all the love there could be
    There's a reason for me too
    I'm here to help other's understand You

    There's a reason for me too
    I'm here to help others understand You

    ......done...umm...I play it on the guitar with the chords G,A,E,D
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    Good song. It expresses your views well.
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    Thanx so much, mi sister can rite better and i basically hate that she can do anything she wants, and ses good at it, and anything i wanna do, im not good at
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    I wont be able to talk for the next couple of days...im away at MBC...rote that in introductions/just signed up....so...rite bck soon
    • CommentAuthoregs
    • CommentTimeOct 25th 2007
     
    Have a great visit. God Bless, Eva
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    thanks...I had SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much FUN!!! I always do...mi church goes up every year....its only for the weekend though

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